Haiku

I had a really fun idea. Let’s make a collection of haiku about ritual abuse, mind control, and healing. Especially healing!

You can put your haiku in the comments section and every so often I will collect them and make a new post with all of them. Then you can add still more in the comments section. When we get 1,000, (or maybe a little earlier) we can think of publishing them. At that point, we can ask for 1,000 illustrations. Whoohoo, what a book that would be!

The traditional haiku has no title. It has 17 syllables, consisting of:

A line of 5 syllables
A line of 7 syllables
A final line of 5 syllables

The lines don’t have to rhyme, but they can if you want.

Variations on the length of lines, the total number of syllables, and even the number of lines are acceptable. Some of these variations carry different names in Japanese. It’s not important to know those names — it’s just important to know that you don’t have to be rigid about it.

Many haiku refer to nature and are concrete, conjuring up sights, sounds, or smells. There often is a change of point of view in the middle of the poem.

I’ll get us started.

Sunlight on my face.
Quick! Help!  Where am I today?
My blanket meows.

P.S. Riffing off my  6/10/14  poem:

_    _    _    _    _
_    _    _    _    _    _    _
I have lost my words

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18 thoughts on “Haiku

  1. I am smokey fire
    Laughing like a mad hatter
    In a world of lies

    I scream out my name
    Floating backwards through mirrors
    I have lost myself

    Welcome home Malice!
    Uncle sam will punish me
    Enraged in this cage

    I sorrow no more
    Mind slips sideways, I’m breathless
    Scratching at my knees

    1. Thank you! First for searching and finding the entry, and also for your poems. Tome, they both stand alone and follow each other. I hope you will poke around my other poetry pages.

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